Globalization has changed the world drastically. Some say this is a positive thing for the development of the country, but others prove that the forgetting of the national culture is gradually taking place. In my view, international trade and cross-cultural exchanges have more benefits than disadvantages and in therein essay, I would clarify this issue.
In the economic downturn, the problem of employment worries many people around the world, so globalization should help. In other words, the government and businesses could solve the difficulty of employment for individuals, at the same time citizens would ensure a good life for their families and reduce the social burden. Along with solving the problem of job opportunities, the benefits of developing in a globalized environment make businesses expand their markets to reach potential customers from abroad, leading to increased income and economic growth in the country would grow. Moreover, it should motivate people to learn the languages and understand your culture. So we could find the right things to develop in our nation and promote our country to them. According to "Tuoi Tre newspaper", Vietnam's tourism industry in 2023, welcoming tourists to visit has caused the production's income to increase by 30% compared to 2022. This in addition to making the economy grow, created jobs for many local people. At the same time, this has brought Vietnamese cuisine to a new level when introducing two dishes, "Pho" and "Banh mi" in the list of the top 10 most delicious cooking in the world.
Admittedly, the domination of the cultures of the rich countries hastened the transformation of the cultural specialties of the nations. For example, the young Vietnamese generation prefers American and Korean songs and movies to their traditional folk lyrics, dances, or theater through the process of integration. As a result, Western costumes, dishes and lifestyles have gradually penetrated into the daily lives of Vietnamese people, replacing other long-standing values. This would help increase the amount of money in those countries leading to stronger economies. However, the cultural exchange of young people is only a trend that is not sustainable because these should be very expensive to maintain for a long time, and nobody could afford them. Moreover, we would often use the local language better than others, and at the same time, Vietnamese traditions are always maintained and protected by law, so this could be very difficult to be replaced.
In conclusion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of business and cultural relations. So I strongly agree that globalization can greatly affect the economic performance of a country in a positive way in addition to improving cultural diversity globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04887771414 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581235697941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2000354071 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20757667942 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626655931103 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492167494305 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127323370316 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161948794523 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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