Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
Now a day by improving technology and internet all jobs and method of studying are changed. hence people can learn something and do their job whit out spend a lot of time or money for that. online learing is one of method which is some universities and schools start working on it and they get some positive result from that. but they should work on it and it has some problem yet. I think it has positive effect on world education system and it can change that.
E-learning is a new topic in the world and it is interesting for most of the people. Because they don't need waste their time and money to go to the class and sit in front of professor. besides of that universities can decrease their building while they can increase their student by internet. although people can study their courses every time of the day. therefore they do their important jobs and then sit in front of their computer and watch or listen to their teachers course. So it has different kind of advantages which are change education method.
As mentioned above universities and schools should work on their online education system and try to improve that. Recently we have some problem in this method like internet speed, asking question during the course etc. hence they should find a way to solve these difficulties and make this method easier.
In addition, online education is a good idea and all people in the world accept that, but they should work on it and improve that. Also this method can help to the environment and reduce environmental degradation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69485294118 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46431879155 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.415030532 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8125 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134058303705 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477029560048 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418365763154 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090483745772 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423775930583 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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