Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do think is better

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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do think is better?

There is often said that most adults are hurrying to start to live separate from their parents. Others say that some of them choose to be with their nuclear family for a longer period. I strongly believe that to begin living on their own without the parents helps us to rise as a successful individual.

As far as I am concerned a response to this idea varies in every country. In eastern culture, for example in Uzbekistan, staying with the parents is accepted as a normal behavior and usually the youngest son will live with them forever so the house where they live is going to him as a heritance automatically. No other child of family are going to fight for this house with exception of some rare situations. There is the reason of course, why other children tolerate this because anyway they will have one also as a gift or will get huge support from their parents. The Uzbek parents strive all their life to create a decent standard of living for each of their children and therefore they have less time to travel or enjoy their life in retirement. On top of that some of them might earn an illness which hinders to reside properly. And some children take this sacrifices as granted and not value them.

On the other side adult independent child could achieve the success that those people who are dwelling with their families can only dream of. Obviously at the beginning it is going to be tough leaving our comfort zone. For example for the adult child in the USA it is normal situation to become independent and it sounds strange when they continue living in parents’ house. Most of them have clear view of their future and certain goals so they follow them. I am convinced that the children will have a mature mindset and be mentally ready for the independent life, if they know from early age that they are going to live separate from their parents when they reach the age of 18.

All in all to be independent from parents has a huge positive impact for the future success of an individual.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to rise as a successful individual. As far as I am concerned a response to thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, therefore, well, for example, of course, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5635359116 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35294909926 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4840691379 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332173381556 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112366987786 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724743329263 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215248590734 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778068294195 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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