In the current era, there is high trend of young people staying in cities and ignoring their home town or rural background. Reasons could be based on their education or job. In this essay, I would be discussing on issue because of which young people leave to city on par with their career perspectives and solution for issue.
Firstly, main issue is that young people are connected majorly to city life by their jobs. Furthermore, most of private companies prefer to setup their locations in cities, so its affordable by transport, network and by all means. Hence, young people are mesmerized by private companies in city which are unavailable in countryside. Consequently, there is increase in youth population in city. Also, young generation are attracted towards hypermarket in shopping mall and imported goods in international shops set locally in cities. Hence, they feel comfortable in city life than country side.
On contrary, Old people would be suffering with lack of physical, and emotional support from their children, as they are staying away from them in cities. If they fall sick, they need to consult doctor alone, and they feel seperated from their children. In addition, Old people may not be able to convene their advices if young people are taking incorrect decision in their life.
In conclusion, only solution to this issue would be from governement perspective. Government need to take primary steps to slash down real estate rates or construction taxes in countryside, allowing private companies to setup their premise in countryside. This step has already been taken by Japan by making private companies to setup their location in countryside and it helps young people to access their job location at ease and stay in touch with their parents. This solutions avoid young people leaving their country side and there would not be a reason for them to relocate to city post this company shifts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10759493671 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65349941118 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0823611673 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235974886099 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896982035707 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804775988641 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158969923463 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517530864933 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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