Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.
We live in an interconnect-world where every day, we have to share with others in different ways. In fact, building good relations is not an easy task, and it takes a long time to achieve a strong relationship. Therefore, we must carefully choose the words that we tell. Some people say that in some cases, it is better to tell a lie rather than tell the truth. In this essay, I will argue why I agree with this statement.
Is so tricky keeping a good relationship up because the words and sentences that we use have a strong effect over some people. In some cases, it is better do not to tell the truth with the aim do not hurt someone's feelings because nobody knows how it will affect them. For example, I know someone who does not like her body, specifically, she does not like to be fat. So, there are some times in which she is fat and others she is thin. Thus, When she is fat, I do not tell her that she is fat since I know that it is an issue for her, and I do not want to hurt her. Hence, I prefer to lie as I want to see her happy. If sometimes we tell a lie, we could get more benefits for everyone.
There are situations in which you want keeping up a relationship. Although some people may disagree, I think that do not tell the truth is part of loyalty with someone. For instance, if a friend want that I keep a secret from them, I will do that as they are trusting in me, and it is something so important these days. Nowadays, loyalty is a value difficult to find.
To sum up, to tell a lie instead of telling the truth can get some benefits in a relationship. For example, when you do not want to hurt feelings and emotions. Moreover, if you want to be loyal to someone and keep a secret. These two reasons support why I agree with the statement that, in some cases, it is better to tell a lie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: WANT_THAT_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'want me to'?
Suggestion: want me to
...with someone. For instance, if a friend want that I keep a secret from them, I will do that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in some cases, to sum up, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11549295775 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44138750342 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459154929577 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2496280969 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.05 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242764046045 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731312726708 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105857717874 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159051577821 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509787454124 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 12.4159519038 51% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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