Which transportation vehicle has changed people's lives?
Today we can see a lot of vehicles that allow us to move anywhere, such as bicycles, cars, trains, airplanes and so on. some people can choose the bicycle as the main way to move around the city and, therefore that is the vehicle that impacted in their life. however, others can think that trains may be the most important creation. I think it is a very personal opinion because it depends on how relevant is those way of transport for people’s life. In my opinion, the airplane is the transportation vehicle that has changes people’s life.
First, years ago, when the airplane did not exist, the main way to transport people to another country was the ship and this trip, in some cases, was so long and took several days. today, a lot of people can afford a ticket for airplane and, for instance, can visit some friend in another country or take a vacation in a Caribbean beach. The existence of commercial trip allows people go far in less time than whether they had taken a trip in a ship.
Second, the airplane has allowed to connect markets in different countries, I mean, before if you had wanted to buy something in another country you had waited a lot of time for the product comes arrive to your house. In other words, the airplane has allowed to minimize the time between you buy and you receive the product. In fact, it is very important for people who need some medicine and can not find it in their countries and, therefore, they must buy it in other country.
Finally, I believe that the airplane has had a real impact in people’s life does it easier and more comfortable. however, some people would be disagreed with my preference and say that it is not the best transportation vehicle. From their point of view, may be is okay and they have a good reasons for their thoughts, but I am sure that airplanes have become the most important transportation since it has allowed to connect people and goods likes as medicine, foods, appliance and so on, in less time than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...mportant creation. I think it is a very personal opinion because it depends on how relevant is t...
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Suggestion: Today
...ses, was so long and took several days. today, a lot of people can afford a ticket fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'connecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: connecting
...hip. Second, the airplane has allowed to connect markets in different countries, I mean,...
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Message: Did you mean 'minimizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: minimizing
...n other words, the airplane has allowed to minimize the time between you buy and you receiv...
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56080228314 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505555555556 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2761864327 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169302354267 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756386319503 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827252880889 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109678124488 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680917212837 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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