Which transportation vehicle has changed people’s lives?
With the development of technology, human invent many vehicles such as the bicycle, the car, train and ship that have a great influence on our lives. But if someone asks me which of the transportation vehicle has changed people’s lives, without any doubt, I would say the airplane. In my opinion, the transportation industry could divide before the advent of the airplane and after that. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to supporting my views.
The first and the most reason is that using the airplane is an economical choice for passengers and would save their times. Nowadays, many countries have a progressive air industry that encourages people to choose this vehicle as a first option for traveling. To illustrate that idea, let’s consider the following example. I work in one of the branches of the carpet company, our company often invite for meeting in the centre company that is far from us, If my workers want to go there by a private car it takes twenty hours that would waste their times, but by airplane they will arrive at the destination just 3 hours, that is time-saving. In terms of which one would save money, undoubtedly, flying by airplane because they should pay so much money on gas for driving a private car that is very expensive.
Additionally, the invention of the airplane helps human in the emergency condition so much. When a disaster happens one of the main vehicles that use by the government for aid is the airplane. For instance, when the earthquake happens in a big city and affected lives of the great population, the government need a vehicle that could bring reinforcements and aids at least time to earthquake affected area, in this situation airplane could be a big help. Usually many ways due to the earthquake destroy and the only useful option that remains is the airways. Also, in the global anti-terrorist war, military force attack on terrorist shelters and destroy them with minimum expense of money and soldier, with maximum meticulousness.
By way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that the invention of the airplane had a great effect on our lives with saving our money and time on the traveling. Furthermore, with the use of the airplane, the government could help people in the urgent situation and save the lives of thousands of people that stuck in the disaster
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, as for, at least, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86797066015 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81308567583 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508557457213 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3651691523 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4375 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213289221367 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675258859386 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100672376006 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132787757404 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839366701905 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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