Which transportation vehicle has changed people's lives?
Today we can see a lot of vehicles that allow us to move anywhere, such as bicycles, cars, trains, airplanes and so on. Some people might choose bicycles as the main way to move around the city and, therefore they could say that bicycles are the most important invention to transport people. However, I think it is a very personal opinion because it depends on a variety of factors to select the best answer. But If I have to pick one, I would say that the airplane is the transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives.
First, when the airplane did not exist, the main way to transport people to another country was by ship and, sometimes, this trip was long and took several days. Today, many people can afford a ticket for an airplane and, for instance, can visit some friends in another country or take a vacation in a Caribbean beach. In fact, the existence of commercial trips has allowed people go far in less time unlike taking a trip by ship.
Second, airplanes have allowed to connect markets from different countries. I mean, if you had wanted to buy something in another country you had had to wait a long time for the product to arrive at your home. In other words, airplanes have permitted to reduce the time between when you buy and receive the product. In fact, it is very important for people who need some medicine and can not find it in their countries and, therefore, they must buy it in other countries.
Finally, I believe that airplanes has had a real impact on people’s lives does it easier and more comfortable. However, some people would be disagreed with my preference and say that it is not the best transportation vehicle. But I am sure that airplanes have become the most important transportation vehicle since it has allowed joining people and to reach a range of goods like medicine, food and so on, in less time than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: connecting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, i think, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67365269461 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60320001003 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9684155353 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197541957398 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072461419428 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744952300052 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128826530041 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784083788701 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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