Do you prefer to stay in one place or move around?
I think is difficult to decide for one option, since today internet allow us to have access to a huge amount of information in which we can read about people’s experience and how either options has advantages and disadvantages as well. While some people prefer to move around gaining foreign experience, other choose to settle on and building their life in the same place. If I have to pick one, I would choose to stay in one place, specially, for two reasons.
First of all, the main reason for why I prefer to stay in one place is because I love peaceful and relaxing life, as when you move around you must take your stuffs and seeing what you will do with those, so I believe that is stressful and complicated for me. Furthermore, you will not have to take care about where you will live and how will be the people who live in the place that you are moving on.
Second, if you move around you should save some money since you will need it to cover the cost of that movement. For example, if you are moving to another city you will have to pay to someone for taking your stuffs and transporting it toward the new place. on the other hand, maybe you want to sell your stuff instead of bringing with you, in this case, it is important to point out that you will have to pay again for other stuff in your new place, may be used or not. But either you have to spend some money, so that is the reason for I prefer to stay in one place since it cheaper than moving around.
Finally, I pointed out two reason for my preference and I am strongly sure that my point of view is the best for myself. However, humans being can think and make their own decision, and that decision is based on their feelings and thoughts. Therefore, returning to the central issue, other people can think different by my, or even, have other reason por the same predilection which is also accepted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...d transporting it toward the new place. on the other hand, maybe you want to sell ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38068181818 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27306638095 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0317847577 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.45110844103 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419878721858 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174813651211 0.076458572812 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140741038356 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260592638955 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150186109259 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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