In this day and age, with the rapid development of technology and science, it is no longer difficult for people to travel to the universe. Therefore, it is argued that space voyage is significantly grow in the future. In this essay, I will give my own perspective whether this is either a good or bad development.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why expanding space travel is a positive trend. When surroundings are familiar to people, they tend to find out strange activities and are willing to spend a large amount of money to participate in these experiences, especially space tourism. This will contribute to not only private business’s profit but also national budget as a tax account. Therefore, government can use this money to priority spend on another fundamental issues of the society such as poverty or education. Moreover, space travel development helps hundreds of citizens get well-paying jobs as well as satisfy their passion related to the universe because the recruitment quotas offered by this field are higher than other fields. For example, rocket engineer will gain a job with a high income coupled with collaborate in a work environment he loves.
On the other hand, space tourism brings numerous drawbacks to both environment and human. Firstly, the more rockets are launched into the space, the more emissions are released into the environment. Apparently, by burning fossil fuels to power spacecraft, the gases released into the atmosphere in the process can affect or deplete the ozone layer which is the main cause of climate change. Furthermore, in some cases, visitors have to bear many health and even life risks. When a person participates in these experiences, their life can be threatened because of unexpectedly technical glitches that may occur during the conquering progress.
To conclude, people have different views about whether the development of space voyage is a positive or negative growth. However, I strongly believe that the government should harmonize the policy of expansion and restriction of magnetic emissions to make space travel a promising field in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...gued that space voyage is significantly grow in the future. In this essay, I will gi...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...e, in some cases, visitors have to bear many health and even life risks. When a person part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18895348837 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8838366795 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2672547573 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250860944529 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075011637543 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071240198848 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148741845853 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518545653008 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.