In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, despite the breakthroughs made in the field of agriculture, many individuals are still facing hunger and famine becomes a global concern. From my perspective, there are two main causes along with some riveting solutions to this pressing issue, which will be mentioned in this essay.
On the one hand, there are two reasons for which many people are going hungry. The first factor that can be taken into account is the financial gap and the increasing disparity between people. It is indisputable that financial status directly affects each individual’s daily life, especially the demand for sufficient food. For instance, many families in Africa are unable to afford a standard diet of 3 meals a day, leading to detrimental hunger and malnutrition in children. Moreover, the unequal share of the food supply is another cause of famine. Developed countries, with their economic strength and power, are dominating the food market. This allows them to freely adjust the price of food, which makes food ridiculously extravagant to the impoverished, causing hunger and lack of food for those living under the line.
However, there are some rational solutions that can optimally tackle this issue. First and foremost, laws should be enacted by the international committee, designating referees to control as well as stabilize the global price of food. In addition, aides and support should be encouraged by the United Nations, helping developing countries meet their needs and resolve their domestic problems. Therefore, more people will have sufficient food sources, especially those living in poor countries.
In conclusion, the financial gap and food unfair provision are the two main factors causing hunger globally. Nonetheless, there are methods to completely solve this burning issue, which mainly depends on international support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...couraged by the United Nations, helping developing countries meet their needs and resolve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48951048951 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82625645707 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9879143844 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143527400243 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482684680684 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435220459921 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931827278939 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427702864377 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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