Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this and what solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Most people suffer from sicknesses as a result of stress nowadays. The main causes of stress related sicknesses including longer working hours and increasing job pressures. This essay will describe the cause of stress and additionally will explain some solutions to these problems including balancing your working life and following a better diet plan.
People are working longer hours than ever before. In addition, they tend to have jobs with more pressures. Most people place themselves under these stressful conditions because the workforce is more competitive in modern society. For example, some people have a desire to become a corporate leader to gain promotions and high salaries. This often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to work overtime and take on additional responsibilities which can be stressful. Moreover, sometimes people have work pressure because the company pushes them by increasing their workload which can be stressful, for example, employers always increase the volume of work but continue to pay their employees low salaries, so they are compelled to do more work to get a higher salary Not only work sometimes people suffer from stress due to family situations as well. Most families with many children have a major responsibility to feed their families and give their children a better education. So every adult has a responsibility to earn money and take care of their families.
However, I believe every person should be able to balance their workload to reduce stress. For example, people can have quality time with their family every weekend like go shopping or family picnics, they will have an opportunity to spend quality time with their families which would be good to reduce stress. In addition people can join a gym to do some physical exercise which can also help to decrease stress. The other factor to get rid of stress and mental sickness is to have a good source of nutritious food which will help in maintaining energy levels, for example, having a nice watermelon juice after a hard-working day can help to decrease stress in unimaginable ways.
Overall, my personal view is that, working long hours and earning lot of money is not the only means of experiencing happiness in our lives as it can give you mental stress and long term sicknesses later on and stress is one of the most dangerous things which can lead to severe heart attacks and other health issues. So, everyone should take care of themselves by spending on time with their families and also be conscious of their overall state of health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07728337237 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63984189944 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510538641686 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0473776008 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.529411765 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142794465698 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505825180924 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444187724584 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104754588527 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489351111902 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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