Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the
causes of this and what solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge
and experience.
Most people suffer from sicknesses as a result of stress nowadays. This essay will
discuss the main causes of stress related sicknesses including longer working hours and
increasing job pressures. Additionally, I will suggest some solutions to these problems
including balancing your working life and following a better diet plan.
People are working longer hours than ever before. In addition, they tend to have jobs with
more pressures. Most people place themselves under these stressful conditions because
the workforce is more competitive in modern society. For example, some people have a
desire to become a corporate leader to gain promotions and high salaries. This often
results in mental and physical suffering because they have to work overtime and take on
additional responsibilities which can be stressful. Moreover, sometimes people have work
pressure because the company pushes them by increasing their workload which can be
stressful, for example, employers always increase the volume of work but continue to
pay their employees low salaries so they are compelled to do more work to get a higher
salary
Not only work sometimes people suffer from stress due to family situations as well.
Most families with many children have a major responsibility to feed their families and
give their children a better education. So every adult has a responsibility to earn money
and take care of their families.
However, I believe every person should be able to balance their workload to reduce
stress. For example, people can have quality time with their family every weekend like
go shopping or family picnics, they will have an opportunity to spend quality time
with their families which would be good to reduce stress. In addition people can join a
gym to do some physical exercise which can also help to decrease stress. The other factor
to get rid of stress and mental sickness is to have a good source of nutritious food which
will help in maintaining energy levels, for example, having a nice watermelon juice after
a hard working day can help to decrease stress in unimaginable ways.
Overall, my personal view is that working long hours and earning lot of money is not
the only means of experiencing happiness in our lives as it can give you mental stress and
long term sicknesses later on and stress is one of the most dangerous things which can to
lead to severe heart attacks and other health issues. So, everyone should take care of
themselves by spending my time with their families and also be conscious of their
overall state of health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63147412212 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510588235294 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4344319809 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.647058824 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.38176352705 707% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137595006303 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481268412724 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397935741894 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394018761502 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370689124567 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.