Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that in the era of the internet, libraries become unnecessary. However, I would argue that libraries are still needed in the lives of people especially students.
It is true that students can find any book or study material they need online. However, this does not imply that the libraries have became unnecessary. Firstly, many people still use libraries to read or study. Because the libraries have very quiet surroundings. Secondly, continuously reading from a digital screen is hazardous for the user's eyes. Search habit may damage the eyesight at some extent. On the other hand, reading from the book is always a good idea for one's health.
There are many libraries in the world which have historical values. For example, M J library of Ahmedabad is one of the oldest libraries of the city. Moreover using the libraries is also economical and environmental friendly. Students can borrow books from the library so they do not have to buy their own books. Finally I please provide reliable data to students, whereas internet sources sometimes failed to provide relevant and trustworthy information.
In conclusion although I recognise the true value of internet, I would certainly disagree that libraries have lost their values from a student's life. Libraries play a vital role in the life of a student.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... does not imply that the libraries have became unnecessary. Firstly, many people still...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e still use libraries to read or study. Because the libraries have very quiet surroundi...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...from the book is always a good idea for ones health. There are many libraries in ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ne of the oldest libraries of the city. Moreover using the libraries is also economical ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...hey do not have to buy their own books. Finally I please provide reliable data to stude...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...libraries have lost their values from a students life. Libraries play a vital role in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12844036697 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72839779586 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4397066311 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.875 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185864088461 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629636582561 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507865788631 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113679401702 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396691262425 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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