Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?
Art is to human what sun is to plants. Some courses such as art, music and drama have role in our life and there are more vital for our personal life than math and physic. Because of that assign more time for them might be appropriate. The truth is that art is necessity, owing to spiritual health and personal life.
Topping the list of art merits is role of art in our personal life. In the main, all kind of art such as music and drama represent depth feeling of human because of that familiarity with art not only help us to knowing our emotions but also others ones. In consequence, when one of our friend deal with a emotional issue that all of us face with throughout our life many times, we can convinced our friends more precise. As a result, can help them to alleviate their depression problems.
Look at from spiritual point of view, art is a remedy for our pain in comparison to math and physic that are need for calculating. At first blush, lack of math and physic knowledge might across as a problem, but passing a few course about these topics could be enough for daily routins need. Albeit for specific major such as engineering this courses must be expanded. Art courses, in essence, is essential for all major due the fact that knowing art and music can perpetuate calmness to our life.
In the final analysis, some courses are necessity for all aspect of our life such as art and some are in some aspects such as work for example math. Taking more time an art teach us to perceive human emotion and this ability is a key to alleviate mental pain that people suffer in their life. As a result art must be a priority in all plans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'vitals'?
Suggestion: vitals
...ave role in our life and there are more vital for our personal life than math and phy...
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Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uence, when one of our friend deal with a emotional issue that all of us face wit...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'convince'
Suggestion: convince
... throughout our life many times, we can convinced our friends more precise. As a result, ...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun course seems to be countable; consider using: 'few courses'.
Suggestion: few courses
...ight across as a problem, but passing a few course about these topics could be enough for ...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... pain that people suffer in their life. As a result art must be a priority in all ...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt art must be a priority in all plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for example, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40196078431 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.290775082 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493464052288 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.226495529 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149722100094 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639901700263 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461685781862 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110300484021 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469077468493 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.