It is irrefutable fact that advertisemante are ever present and ubiqiutious and also, big industries that to use powerful promotions to eran more profit. Most of well-established organizations throught the globe to take help of advertisements to enhance their sales. Thus, advertising is more is more impactful and the essay will discuss both pros and cons of it, and I believe that it has delterious impact on the community.
To begin with, advertisements can more impressive by following that the ads should be more creative and entertining, thus, people tend to watch entertaing ads and like to know about new present things. Ads are more powerful item enhance sailing . Another persuable method is to hire famous celebrities to show products. This is mainly, becouse they are adored by millions of fans, as a result their fans will follow to buy the products.
On the other hand, ads affect society in a negative way. Although, it makes residents aware of newly launched items, it promotes use and throw culture. As a result , individuals spend their time to purchase unnecessary items. Apart from this, commercials mainly target children, besause children are more impressionable than adults. After watching these ads, they force thier parents to buy those useless products. Since, many families are not well-off, nad the demand to own latest products, and it can led them in debt.
In essence, from the aforementioned arguments, it is evident that international companies increase their revenue by making attractive advertisement and they making attractive advertisement and they have negative effects which are hazardous to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, thus, well, apart from, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30268199234 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05084214843 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1152240247 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212419198962 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569212930144 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623467066098 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131394874844 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636289355919 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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