Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?
These days, every sector has lots of competition. So every successful organization use the different types of technique for increasing the sales and make profit. During this competitive world product or services advertisement is very effective tools for increasing the sales of companies.
Marketing is the best weapon of sales, so at the business point of view it is most important things for organization. Likewise, advertising will be able to attract the customer and provided the information about product or services, which should increase the sales. And also there were some positive effect on society, like we can see some medicine advertising at Television which provided the information about its uses and its benefits. Although it is linked with national economic, if companies grow up and make profit it will benefited and build employ opportunity.
On the other hand there were some negative effects of advertisement. For example we can see some smoking and alcohols advertisement, these types of advertisement provoke the people specially adults for drinking and smoking. Likewise, lots of vulgar activities take the place in marketing like female models are uses with product. It is also causes of bad things.
In conclusion, there are both sides of effect of advertisement. In my point of view companies should make that kind of marketing advertisement which flow the positive message over the society and make attraction on product or service and create the customers and make profit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...mpanies grow up and make profit it will benefited and build employ opportunity. On the ...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d create the customers and make profit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32773109244 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97144092929 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3233504479 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302732229109 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896325899588 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590782870916 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178089262481 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351989279282 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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