According to many surveys, there has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who living longer aroud the world. This essay will delve effects of this situation on both individuals and society. In my opinion, as people live more and more year some problems occur, such as diseases and increased young unemployment.
Admittedly, after decades of speculation, geriontologists were able to obtain fairly accurate information concerning elderly health and their mental abilities. People who older 65+ suffer from serious illnesses, such as hearth attack, brain stroke even cancer. According to a report published by the New York Times, old people more predisposed to inevitably diseases than young people. Secondly, their creativity and productivity might decrease due to their ages. For instance, if there were less elder employees in Apple, which is the biggest company of the USA, the company would gain more profit from sales thanks to their dynamic managers. Thus, there are a pronounced correlation between age and health and creativity.
Despite these arguments, there are also a variety of possible negative effects of old generation on the society, such as increased health expenditures and young unemployment rate. Perhaps the main negative effect of longer living is that the governement have to spend more money on health sector in order to provide better public hospital services. A good illustraion of this, Germany spend more money on orthopedy industry owing to age of their citizens. Furthermore, goverments should be prudent concerning their older populations because this might be perilous for new generations. Young people either cannot find a job or work with low salary due to older employees. Hence, even though a number of measures have been taken to tackle these problems, the problems could not be solved yet.
In conclusion, it must be said that the decision as to whether living longer is harmful for both society and individuals must be taken in the context of the entire society. However, in my view this situation has a lot of negative effects not only on individuals but also on society, such as health problems, lack of effectiveness work even rising of health expenditures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less eld', 'less old'?
Suggestion: less eld; less old
...their ages. For instance, if there were less elder employees in Apple, which is the bigges...
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Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'correlations'?
Suggestion: correlations
... managers. Thus, there are a pronounced correlation between age and health and creativity. ...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...sion, it must be said that the decision as to whether living longer is harmful for both socie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25915492958 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8117050663 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566197183099 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.394960742 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216191885923 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612020406417 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641782834923 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142662069436 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681019863119 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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