Task 2: Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced.
What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?
In recent years, the industry of meat production has been developed all over the world. Many people assume that meat's consumption worldwide, which taking large areas to establish, needs a consirable reduction as the land is no longer available to offer citizens. Several solutions to address this issue may relate to government's relevance; however, still rasing some problems.
It is undeniable that education would play a vital role to change people's cognition about their balanced diets. Numerous children in this modern age are not in favor of consuming vegetables which contain minerals and vitamins for their healthy developments. Therefore, the government should allocate as well as conduct more research on health education that help children understand the advantages of eating other food besides meat. Notwithstanding, this is considered as a long-term strategy that might take years to persuade people to diminish meat consumption.
Besides, due to the fact that fast food production is one of the most sectors generating mainly from meat, this industry should be restricted by government's regulations. To start with, the government should ban on openning food stores around schools since children are the target of this type of business. Secondly, companies and niches in this industry would not have allowance of operation unless they can response to the strict accessments on ingredient origins along with the processing quality. Nevertheless, people with low income may struggle with daily meals as junk food is inexpensive and does not require much time to eat.
In conclusion, there are some suggestions could deal with the problem of producing meat which are educating children and restricting fast-food companies. Unfortunately, applying these solutions is not totally effective since it also bring another issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'meats'' or 'meat's'?
Suggestion: meats'; meat's
...over the world. Many people assume that meats consumption worldwide, which taking lar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53736654804 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90307712437 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669039145907 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8704105661 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192781761795 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064127998167 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591207868351 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114132891203 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574797739712 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.