Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced.
What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a debate going among the people that the production of non-veg food requires a great sum of land. and, nowadays land is very limited so the production of meat throughout the world should be reduced. In this essay, the measures taken to control the production and by doing these what kind of issues might arrive are all explained below.
On the first hand, Meat was the primary source of food for mankind in its early days. but, now as the population grew significantly meat production became a billion-dollar industry and issues started to arise. Further, there is an organization of vegan people around the world which is spreading awareness among society about the losses caused by meat production. Whereas, scientists are also researching on artificial meat production with the help of plants. For example, Japan is a country of innovations and one such innovation is done by a researcher who is trying to make meat with the help of different plants.
On the other hand, To control the population of carnivorous animals meat is generally produced. at the same time banning meat production might create rapid growth in the numbers of such animals. Secondly, people who eat meat on regular basis cannot resist without it and ultimately such a decision will create a mess within the system. Further, people who are totally dependent on meat businesses like fishermen will be highly impacted by these decisions.
To conclude, Reducing meat production is not an easy task to achieve there are communities whose survival depends on the meat business. so the authorities should find a better way to impose the regulations which will be in favor of everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75352604826 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3181997665 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372244759987 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119997172947 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647170610148 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223370277416 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714071014801 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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