Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some people argue that it is better to accept the conditions whether the situation is bad or good with respect to money or any unsatisfied job experience. Whereas, other groups of people think that it's better to try and fight rather than just waiting and watching. In this essay, both these opinions are discussed in the below paragraphs and concluded in the end.
On the first hand, A Individual's life is full of adventures and people don't know how the future conditions are going to be. So, In common some see it as a bad phase of life and wait for the right to make any moves. For instance, there are a significant number of people who invest in equities or mutual funds, so if suppose the market goes down people wait for the figures to climb up to make further decisions. Secondly, a plethora of people do underpaid or toxic jobs because they have some of the other loans upon them and also they have other expenses.
On the other hand, there are some people who try to find a way in such a scenario. Further, there are goal-focused people who in any case try to overcome any wrost situations. For example, If a student gets low marks than expected then some pupils try to focus on their mistakes learn from them and in the post attempt, they overcome that weakness. Actually, situations are all about a person's ability, and some fight with the conditions and make it favorable or the others consider it as a bad time and wait.
To conclude, I would say that both these ideas are considerable and have their own benefits. So, I totally believe that people should take it as an opportunity if the odds are in their favor. At the same time, others who think there is nothing they can do then they should wait.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in any case, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54140127389 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4169939409 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5569167637 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283769013133 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955298168415 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687883188168 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174686604663 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880995491109 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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