Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today a great number of people think that the extended prison penalty is the most prime way to control unlawful activity. Whereas, others believe that there are many different ways to deplete crime. As far as I am concerned, I totally believe that a strict law can only bring change. Both the agendas are discussed below in the coming paragraphs.
On the first hand, As the world is getting developed in terms of everything, the crime rates are also started increasing. Nowadays, crimes such as illegal drug activities or Rape cases are occurring more often than they used to be. So, to counter the same the authorities will have to come up with new and harsh punishments to create fear amongst the lawbreakers. A prolonged jail sentence can break any individual from inside and with that, everybody will think twice before committing any nonsense activity. For example, China has a very strict policy with respect to punishments; therefore, the rate of crimes in china is significantly low as compared to other countries.
On the other hand, the penalizing authorities now use a plethora of ideas to overcome ever-increasing crime rates. To regulate the growing numbers in jails, crimes like drug abuse are now dealt with in rehabilitation centers. If the action of the offender is not severe then the matter is tried to resolve without involving a prison sentence. The benefit of such practice is to generate a mindset inside the brain of criminals that the thing they have done has very dangerous consciousness so that they will think before repeating the same.
To conclude, I would say that you cant reduce the rate of offenses by altering the penalization techniques. The government should take the initiative to extend its source of information and try to stop any faulty action before it is committed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98355263158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79099193725 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.528688193 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1905563014 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612088820944 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658125114636 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109194136471 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854480618509 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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