The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000 It also predicts figures for 2025

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The graph below compares figures for the production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000. It also predicts figures for 2025.

The graph illustrates the utilization and manufacturing of energy in the United States of America from the year 1950 till 2000. the graph also shows the future consumption for the year 2025.

Overall, It can be seen that the production of energy stayed below the consumption rate throughout. whereas, the unit of measurement, in this case, is BUT's (British Thermal Units).

Firstly, In the year 1950, there was minimal difference between using and making of energy which is 30 and 25 units respectively. At the same time, it can be observed that the trend remains with a gradual increase on both sides till the year 1975, which stands out at 60 for consumption and 60 for production. Secondly, there were a lot of fluctuations in both the trends after 1975 till 2000, but the gap between the both started increasing significantly. Lastly, the projected consumption by authorities shows a steep increase at 130, but the production still under the required units at 80.

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Average: 8.5 (7 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: Whereas
... below the consumption rate throughout. whereas, the unit of measurement, in this case,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uction still under the required units at 80.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85304438197 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.608768232 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2450565206 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112345703448 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953019146896 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185264874794 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101268968003 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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