The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

Essay topics:

The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart indicates the amount of various nutrient intake of an average person in the USA in the form of their daily meal and snacks. At the same time, It might be unhealthy if consumed in excess proportion.

Overall, It can be seen that there are mainly three types of nutrients Sodium, Saturated fat, and added sugar.

Firstly, looking at the consumption of sodium, during lunchtime people intake the largest quantity at 41%. Further, at the time of breakfast and snacks, people generally eat the least quantity and that is why the sodium consumption is also low at 14%. Whereas, 29% of sodium is added while having lunch. Secondly, the same scenario is with saturated fat, dinner is the prime source of fat intake with 37%; after that, lunch is the second major source of saturated fats standing out at 26% followed by breakfast i.e 21% respectively. Last but not least, fat consumption is low with breakfast at just 16%.

On the other hand, added sugar is also the major source of illness when eaten in excess quantity. Surprisingly, a significant amount of added sugar is consumed at the time of snacks as the data shows more than 40%. The second most occasion of fat intake is during dinner time with 23%. Lastly, breakfast and lunch numbers stand below 20% with respect to saturated fats.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sodium consumption is also low at 14%. Whereas, 29% of sodium is added while having lu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, with respect to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80088495575 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44188863612 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3752104372 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4166666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14186415075 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603477191138 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898612323142 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129581915959 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125630186202 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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