Task 2: More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Many people are spending money on luxurious items of popular brands. The primary reason for this precadiment is that the living standard is rising and I believe this is a negative development because it aggravates the saving lifestyle.
The root cause of people wanting to have famous clothes or cars is the rising standard of living. Many people are earning more with high-paying jobs, so it is understandable that they want to spend money on luxurious furniture and commodities regardless of the cost as a reward for hard working and life enjoyment. However, this will facilitate the wasteful lifestyle of many men and women, as they will be addicted to buying the newest items despite the fact that old items are still usable. For example, my friend owns various versions of the iPhone because he changes every year although the previous is still working well
This precadiment will worsen the healthy lifestyle of many people. That is to say that instead of spending money necessarily and saving money for emergencies, people tend to throw money trying to own a limited version of an item. And this will result in staggering cash deficiency, affecting the ability to provide for themselves and their family in the future and children's behaviour. For example, young workers in Vietnam are unable to live independently from their family because nearly 60% of their salaries are used for shopping.
In conclusion, famous brand items are being bought increasingly because people are more wealthy and this is a major issue because it will make the saving lifestyle among people obsolete.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09923664122 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65255917165 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9582355317 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173471393724 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748698060739 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660050818221 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120039319074 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600215269642 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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