Task 2 To succeed in a business one needs to know maths To what extent do you agree or disagree

Increasing business is now flourishing by heaps and bounds. Nowadays, everyone want to do business as part of side job or full time job. Business need some prerequisites too. Like, proper knowledge about business and their pros and cons, management skills, mathematics and many more. Mathematics is basic requirement of any business. While this requirement is has some disagreement in some extent, I would argue that mathematics is needed to run any kind of business. I totally agree with the statement.

To begin with, every business has profit and lost at some extent, for this situation people should know about how to overcome by calculating their credit and debit income and by managing that he or she can survive from this situation. To good illustration of this case, many people started stationary as side business and stated buying things without any calculation and after some time if any situation occurred and business goes down at that time they even cannot afford their losses. Secondly, in business people have to estimate their income by monthly or yearly basis buy including their debts and credits for this people should have basic knowledge about account for this mathematics plays vital role. For example, any small business gives profit as much they can feed their family but if they do not maintain their debts then it would turns into lost that’s why proper account of money for monthly or yearly basis is calculated before the spending.

On the other hand, some small business just work on NGO’s type in this kind of business people, who work there do not need mathematics they just have to work accordingly their budget that’s it. They do not to worry about lost they have to donate as per the donation. For illustrates, there are many business in the country which, work on basis of the donation of donor in this case work does not need any kind of mathematics knowledge.

In conclusion, there are many advantages of mathematics. Although there are some disagreement are there by some people, I would argue that I firmly agree with that every business need mathematics knowledge. People should have to learn mathematics before do any kind of business.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...their income by monthly or yearly basis buy including their debts and credits for t...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
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Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...People should have to learn mathematics before do any kind of business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99726775956 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59801587066 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464480874317 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2710065227 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150444297472 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616879075404 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370752724583 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111606763426 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028886610865 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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