The emergence of new resistant and more fatal diseases demands the increased research. Today most of private pharmaceutical industries sponsored medical research projects. In this essay we will discuss the why most of the projects by non-government organization and government, private and each approaches toward research in improvement in overall health of society.
To commence with, we cannot say in which situation what disease occur. Even we cannot say how much it is cost for research in the project take cost for depth knowledge about diseases and their solution for lifetime. It cost too much for those project even in millions of dollars. It is not possible provide this much of amount by single hand it needs collaboration with two or more pharmaceutical industries or organizations. For example, the Bil gates foundation funded for diseases of dengue, malaria and chickenpox which, cost too much for one foundation so Smith Jonas collaborate with them and made agreement that after completion of formula of medicines the label of medicine was only by their organization name Smith Jonas’s name. It works successfully and after completion of medicine both organizations gain huge amount of profit.
On the other hand, if Government funded those project than they have to make big budget for the same which not good for other internationals and domestic problem such as transportation, technology, advancement and many more. It is valid that Government should approve private companies and make agreement that medicine which will formulate that will made under observation of Government. That is positive step for both private organizations and for Government too.
In conclusion, medical research should funded by private companies and it is beneficial if they collaborate with other private organization because it is not possible for single industry to funded millions of dollars at one time. In my opinion, it is funded by private companies and Government should verified those industries and take observation throughout the project.
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if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05490768068 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509375 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9505432808 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219032477963 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902767644547 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814932682612 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175329215201 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101725588856 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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