Task 2: To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a lot of arguments about how to be success in business. Many people believe that Maths plays an important role in a successful businessman. At some point, I agree with this idea.
Let’s begin by looking at the importance of Maths in business. The main reason is that Maths requires a lot of logical thinking. From calculating a simple plus to solving a complex argument, learners always need to be focus on every steps. Should they do a small mistake in a single step, the whole problem may be wrong. Managing a business is pretty similar: every decision of the manager may lead to a massive deal, so calculating everything carefully is vital. Moreover, even some activities in a company is realted directly to Maths too, such as accounting and banking. As we can see, Mathematics cannnot be missed in a man’s business.
On the other hand, someone do not need to know Maths that well to become a successful businessman. For example, having an accountant may solve everything related to money of a company. In my opinion, to run a business smoothly, the most important thing is the director’s vision. That is the reason why although some of inventors are very smart, they often end up giving their company to some one who have a leaders’ virtues.
In conclusion, I believe that knowing Maths is essential to succeed in business, but you do not have to know Maths well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...business. On the other hand, someone do not need to know Maths that well to bec...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the inventors') or simply say ''some inventors''.
Suggestion: some of the inventors; some inventors
...vision. That is the reason why although some of inventors are very smart, they often end up givin...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ey often end up giving their company to some one who have a leaders’ virtues. In conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, moreover, so, well, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76446280992 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76737669011 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607438016529 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4555031644 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218375640159 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649146455646 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824784921287 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151482815907 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101267458322 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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