Is the mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports. Discuss both views and give opinion.
Opinions differ whether mental or physical strength poses a more tremendous impact on sport players’ performance. Personally, I do think both views are reasonable as each has its own merits.
On the one hand, it is obvious that a player’s spirit can affect a game’s result. In other words, what athletes think and feel while participating in a competition may decide how excellently they can perform. For instance, a sportsperson is often under the pressure of high expectation from the others, therefore causing them to feel anxious and stressed. In term of sport, human’s behaviors and actions are often controlled by their emotion. As a result, should they not have a strong and determined will, they may feel discouraged by various ways and cannot strive for the victory.
On the other hand, the body’s capability also contributes to one’s success. Sports center on people’s movements, agility, dexterity and flexibility. Hence, it is essential that physical strength plays a prominent role in a competition. Take the Vietnamese football team for example, however iron-willed they might be, they could not defeat greater foreign teams like the Britain or Japanese due to the lack of physical quality. Nonetheless, playing sports requires an enormous amount of energy, and thus demands players’ durability for abundant stamina. In addition, most elite athletes are cautious and well-prepared in exercising and eating to build muscle. The reason is that physical toughness helps them avoid injuries during training or competition, or their sporting career would be ruined by injuries. In other words, being in good physical condition ensures their continuity in athletic performance.
In conclusion, sports players have to face both physical and mental difficulties on the field. Therefore, they should be trained to be physically fit and mentally resilient, otherwise, no triumph can be guaranteed for them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48160535117 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96776340054 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2621464284 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8235294118 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217594869455 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673655596359 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654467344135 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144523016764 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550204094198 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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