You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic.
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, thanks to the advancement of technology, we can buy anything with just one click from home. Although online shopping is good but it will make more difficult for local products to compete in the marketplace. Today let us examine both views before reaching a reasonable conclusion for both individuals and companies to shopping online.
This problem have both avantage and disavantage. First, I strongly opai that my opinion is that online shopping is more convenient and save a lot of time for buyer because they just need to choose what they want to buy with a click. Companies also finding this trend encouraging due to the reason that they are able to save the expends they could have incurred on the construction of their stores. Online shopping have more discount than buying in the shop so companies offer discounts that attract customers to buy products from their own company and Internet ads will earn them a huge income each year.
On the other hand, online shopping still have some disavantage with both companies and individuals. Buying local products has been completely overshadowed by shopping online and it will make local products cannot exist in the market anymore. Second is the security of the website. Hacker can easilly hack into the website and stealing the private information of the costumer and sell them in the black market. Another reason is the quality of the products. There are still people in huge numbers that do not trust the products sold by online websites because in a few cases customers have received duplicate products. Some companies have extremely sophisticated forms of fraud that many people are easily scammed. To sum up, It is quiet true that people are inclining towards online shopping instead of conventional shopping, due to the better buying experience and time efficiency and also it has helped the companies save funds that they could have been spent on building the physical stores but I think we should buy the local products to improve the
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...nies to shopping online. This problem have both avantage and disavantage. First, ...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve both avantage and disavantage. First, I strongly opai that my opinion is that ...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...uality of the products. There are still people in huge numbers that do not trust the p...
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Line 3, column 1067, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld buy the local products to improve the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04179104478 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58055514758 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0276659904 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234270879477 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722942278629 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529584240469 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157110236641 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360398614983 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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