teach children
It’s is important that teach children to be good members of society.Some people think it’s task of your parents, the others believe it ‘s task of school. And in my opinions, I think it ‘s duty both of them.
In order to a good person of society, you should be brought up in good environment. If your parents have a good knowledge and awarness in child rearing, you will become a productive citizen. No deny that importance of parents in child rearing because it will directly affects a child’s personality and dignity. They will aware their action towards to society and help our countries completely developed.
Besides that, not only the education of parents but also the school. Because school is a place where students consider the second home. At here, students will get in touch with the other students, teachers and will experiences working, living or communicating with people who from over the world. And it’s also partly shaping child’s character.
So, I personal I think it needs co-ordination between parents and school to teach children to be a good members of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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It’s is important that teach children to be goo...
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... children to be good members of society.Some people think it’s task of your parents,...
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...ucation of parents but also the school. Because school is a place where students consid...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
...h the other students, teachers and will experiences working, living or communicating with p...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...d school to teach children to be a good members of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00543478261 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71014250562 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.063492541 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126759820587 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459901963245 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097794017285 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116523620241 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119235321491 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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