Teachers and other professionals are barely compensated. On the other hand, artists and sports athletes are highly paid. What do you think are the reasons and causes of this? What should be done about this?
In the modern world, professional sports athletes and celebrities profit more than other professionals who are earning less. There are factors that are affecting the higher revenues of such individuals.
The compensation for those who work in the field of education, allied medical sciences, nursing and other related works are regulated according to their salary grades due to the regulations which are mandated by the government. Meanwhile, sports players and actors are paid according to their professional fee which is regulated by their network or the organization who relies on their fame as a result of them being idolized by their fans or having great talent or skills. Aside from this, those who play in the court or who are in the media are able to gain opportunities outside their field because they have their own managers who casts them in commercials, TV appearances and movies. Christiano Ronaldo, a soccer player, earns much in paid advertisements and talk shows which are added to his total earnings from playing. As a result, higher profits is gained which is more than what they usually expect.
However, there are other fund sources which low income professionals can have. One can start a business which is according to an individual’s passion. This does not only add to the worker’s monthly compensation, but also gives way to an opportunity of making it big in entrepreneurship. Furthermore, buying stocks and company shares provide a long term investment. A lot of financial insurance companies like Manulife and Investment companies like Col Financial which offers mutual funds and stock market schemes help such individuals to plan for a secured retirement plan in the future.
As a whole, those who are in the field of acting and sports earn much as those professionals in other fields because of their fame and how they are paid. But, one is able to have additional income by venturing to other opportunities which aid in attaining a secured retirement plan.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14067278287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99687324392 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1102728155 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132390794321 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478988398717 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460529454317 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094195562271 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324843890553 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.