In this technological era, personal information is held on computers bt many companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The practice of storing privative information of customers on companies’ servers has become increasingly popular these days. From my perspective, although there are some advantages to consider for both the companies and customers, I think the disadvantages of data privacy are more considerable.
The act of creating and maintaining a database of personal information of users is beneficial in a few aspects. Utilizing machine learning and advanced data technologies, an enterprise may have a better understanding of their customers. It means that better services may be provided or more products may be made to exactly suit customer needs. Furthermore, it is convenient for consumers to continue to use the products from these firms. Those who use electronic wallets, for example, may get their transactions done in a matter of seconds providing that their identity and biometric data are available on the websites.
However, despite these advantages, when personal information is kept on the database of their product or service provider, it can be associated with some disadvantages. Companies may sell this data to advertising agencies which then bombard consumers with a huge number of advertisements on all digital media platforms and social networks, Facebook, Twitter for instance. Consequently, consumers are constantly annoyed by the Internet. In addition, from an information security perspective, such practice is even more problematic as there is a risk that sensitive data of the users is compromised. As a result, hackers have access to users’ personal details and they may blackmail the users or withdraw the money from their bank accounts.
All things considered, the storage of personal data of users on online platforms is advantageous because of its convenience and helping companies improve customer experience. The benefits are dwarfed by substantial disadvantages, including personal data security breach and annoyance from the advertisements users has to experience when they are online.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, may, second, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6262295082 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26591939708 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4822381504 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114652753614 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421903293273 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413648424381 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849191460388 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045506989832 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.