There are lot of bad news on television in present time. Have people become used to of these news. Should television show only good news.

Essay topics:

There are lot of bad news on television in present time. Have people become used to of these news. Should television show only good news.

goes without saying that the number of misdeeds are, nowadays, mushrooming around the world, causing the extinction of hope of goodness among the people. Although, in present time, too many bad news are telecasted by the media on television, but it doesn't mean that we have become accustomed to these news. Would it be justification to show the good news? It would be dishonesty with for media people with their profession.

Indeed there is a flood of bad news on television in present time, even then people haven't become used to with these news. Because whenever people listen about the torture in any corner of the globe, they always feel shocked for worst situation. For example, terrorism is a very most common issue for whole world. Whenever, there is a terrorist attack and news of lynching, people feel sad for victims and hatred

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Goes
goes without saying that the number of misde...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much bad news', 'a good deal of bad news'.
Suggestion: much bad news; a good deal of bad news
... people. Although, in present time, too many bad news are telecasted by the media on televisi...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sted by the media on television, but it doesnt mean that we have become accustomed to ...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... mean that we have become accustomed to these news. Would it be justification to show the ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
... media people with their profession. Indeed there is a flood of bad news on televis...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ision in present time, even then people havent become used to with these news. Because...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
... then people havent become used to with these news. Because whenever people listen about t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88111888112 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48620822862 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671328671329 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5197864466 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416434657735 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173708051491 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186104850993 0.0667982634062 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310288171661 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00145661257343 0.056905535591 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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