Universities should take the equal number of males and females in all major courses. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that nowadays, women are raising their shoulders with men in every field of education. Some people feel that in order to maintain the equality, equal number of men and women should be admitted in all major courses of university education. In my opinion, this statement holds a valid ground because females should get the opportunities of studying as males.
Undoubtedly, colleges must accept the same number of males and females for campus education. Because, the IQ level and intelligence in females are mostly similar to the male students , if this policy is implemented in all universities and colleges, it will lead to women empowerment and encourage the more and more women to participate in society's development.For instance, a recent survey suggested that if the equal number of gender participate in a work, the results are more likely to be successful. Hence it's prominent for universities to take equal number of genders in their campus.
However, some people might argue that at some circumstances implementing this policy would be impractical. They feel that although, it is crucial to maintain the gender equality , but there are some courses which are weighed by men, and most females doesn't show their interest to opt these courses.For example, in mechanical engineering , a very few female students apply for admission. And if half of the seats would be reserved for them it would be malignant for male candidates. That's why using this policy everywhere wouldn't be factual
and genuine.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that whereas, maintaining the gender equality in university's education would be advantageous in making the women stronger , but imposing the same policy everywhere wouldn't be practical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29856115108 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95982904888 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.929148454 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200316842398 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08152218397 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070986629558 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122010846058 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636064600279 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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