There is an increasing number of purchasing cars for the first time.
What are the problems? What are the solutions?
The number of the selling cars for the first time is increasing continuously in many third world countries. This phenomenon might produce two problems: the increasing level of the pollutions and traffic congestion. Increasing the standard of vehicle emissions and implementing odd and even car license police number in the road could be two viable solutions, and it should be set by the authority.
The rising number of automobiles will follow the level of the air pollutions in the environment. As a result some diseases would likely to be suffered by many people because of the chemical exposure from the emissions through breathing the contaminated air. Based on data of Wahidin hospital in Makassar that the number of patients suffering lung cancer and pneumonia increased around 13% compared to the previous-year percentage in 2006, and chemical emissions from the fumes are assumed as the main factor to trigger those diseases. Not only that, traffic jam is also a huge problem that often comes up when the volume of cars increase. It occurs because the road could not be widened again whereas the number of mobile-cars go constantly up.
Some people believe that the role of government is admittedly pivotal to deal with those problems. By increasing the level of emissions-regulation standard in each vehicle could restrain the wide-spread pollutions to the environment. On another solution, making policy odd and even police number to drive their cars in the high way could address the traffic jam or reduce the vehicle number in the road. Those regulations have been being implemented by Jakarta’s government, and they succeed to reduce smoke in the sky around 10% as well as the congestion never exist again in the rush hour.
In conclusion, a high number of cars not only could deteriorate the environment through a huge-spread of fumes from the vehicles but also potentially widen the area of congestion. Therefore, the role of government to make some policy could create a massive impact to address this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15361445783 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94697631489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1827781663 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167866169387 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063788444034 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744365443839 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108900309469 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667660225074 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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