Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations.
What problem does this cause and how can those problems be solved?
Some people argue that due to the inability to compete with huge corporations, many small enterprises are threatened to be closed. Because of that, the increasing number of unemployment will appear as the main problem while giving a sufficient loan could be a viable solution to address this issue.
The principal problem that may occur from this cause is the unemployment number will increase significantly, so the gap in income among society is going to follow it as well. It can be seen in Malaysia when the government let many huge companies from China investing their money in their country. Those ventures produced some better products massively and affordable for all level society, and it made the local products are not sold. Because of that, many small businesses suffered bankruptcy.
If the government want to tackle this issue, allocating budget for lending money to small enterprises could become an effective solution to be able to compete with the giant companies. Those loans could be used to help the small firms to accelerate their productions as well as using the money to boost their purchasing through the enormous marketing activities. This initiative has been implemented in China when the authority opened a high opportunity for the startup ventures having loan more easily. That is the reason why most small business in China can accelerate their purchasing performance quickly, turning on the atmospheric trade higher than before.
To sum up, the number of jobless may occur if many small enterprises could not survive in the business world. Therefore, the role of the authority might be vitally pivotal to deal with this problem by allocating more budget for giving loans to every those who cannot compete with huge companies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17482517483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72226544095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5855776029 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306736283569 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113153322979 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603031816485 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206407232902 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420539880467 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.