Increased crime is a pervasive issue in modern societies. To tackle this, some state that offenders should be charged with death sentence as a deterrent, while others advocate charging other penalties, like extended prison jails. In this essay I will examine both these views.
Supporters of capital punishment feel that it deters crime. The main argument is that the fear of death stops people from committing the most violent offences, including murder and rape. A good example is US; recently, after the ex-President resumed this punishment, a criminal sentenced to death because of murdering a pregnant woman. As a result, the crime rates of homicides plummeted. Indeed, the repercussions of such crimes are avoided because the offender cannot pose anymore a threat to others. Obviously, if the death penalty was the rule in countries’ penal codes, the crime rates of the most violent crimes would be decreased.
Even though death sentence has merits, many believe that there are alternative measures, much more effective to eliminate the increased crime rates. The most significant one is the implementation of longer prison sentences. The counterargument to capital punishment is that some criminals are convicted and executed without effective proves, whereas the solution is simple; just throw away the keys. In Turkey, for example, the extension of prison offences caused a reduction in crimes and in recidivism as well. When an individual commits a crime, there is always the possibility of innocence. In these cases, the prison jails act as a good deterrent to all crimes.
In conclusion, although many people feel that capital punishment should be omnipresent, in order to mitigate the high proportion of crimes, there are some who opine that there are alternative ways to serve this purpose, like the longer prison sentences. I am of the view that we have no right to take another human life.
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Suggestion: proofs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25081433225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82270440081 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5963482815 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251913925427 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651770973167 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499609665113 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142608805676 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296926247599 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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