Drug addiction is an alarming situation of today’s society, especially among the youngsters, and some social scientists argue that parents and peer pressure are the reasons of this situation. This essay outlines the peer pressure and family habits as the main causes of this phenomenon, which results in health problems from a very young age and can only be solved by the government.
To begin with, the young people are affected by the bad habits of their family and friends. It is undeniable that parents and friends have a direct impact on children’s behavior. More and more teens are falling prey of drug abuse because of their bad companies or drug use history in their family. A recent study found out that family dynamics and peer affiliation directly influence substance initiation and use. This means that more frequent drug use during early periods of adolescence appears to lead to increased dependency in adulthood. As a result, serious illnesses and chronic health problems become a norm among the teens who extensively abuse drugs.
To get around this problem, the government should take effective measures aiming to eliminate or disappear the drug use by younger people. Central authorities should take initiatives by educating children about the harm effects of drugs on their body and mind. They could also run campaigns related to the health problems caused by drugs and monitor the drug use in public places.
To sum up, drug abuse by teens is a crucial phenomenon nowadays, caused by imitation of family’s and friends’ bad habits and resulted to serious diseases. Therefore, governments should take some measure to protect the young generation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21033210332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67016944732 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0577303131 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199033666825 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711188411451 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451995227484 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117620535897 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228051155085 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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