People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologist claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to fight youth drug abuse.
It is undoubtly the case that, in this present scenerio, "drug addiction" is the burning question of the day. It is consumed by young-generation, it is also affecting the society adversely. Through this essay, I will going to discuss the root cause of this problem as well as effects and methods to mitigate this critical situation.
While, there is a Cascade of reasons for this unfortunate trend. A few of them are more prominent. The first and the formost is peer group. It is responsible for increasing the chances of intake of drugs. According to psychologist named 'jean Piaget' teenagers were highly affected by their peer group. For instance, if individual spend more time with their friends having bad habits; naturally under peer pressure they will opt those habits. Secondly, hactic time schedule of parents plays significant role to increase this trend. Due to this parents are not able to spend much time with their children. As a result, youngestors were not examined by their parents in an appropriate way. There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem that given the complexity to its causes. However, one option has to be to make parents aware by organising seminars and training for instance. As a result, they come to know how they examine their teenagers to tackle this problem.
Apart from that, high status families having rich economic background is the another reason to increase drug addiction in the society. Children having royal family spend much money to live luxurious life style and sometimes they misuse it by consuming drugs. Therefore, to overcome this problem it is needed to council the young-generation about the importance of money and health as well, because according to famous saying, 'health is wealth' so, it is the duty of the parents to guide their children to spend much expenditure on their health as compare to drugs.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that; there are variety of different factors that have led to make the problem worst. However, I tend to believe that there is no single solution to this problem but, it could be probably solve by making parents as well as teenagers aware about illeffects of consuming drugs on their body and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96524064171 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70636449172 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53743315508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6510477695 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.85 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979360940231 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320257267781 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029220601925 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579308473989 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197434040299 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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