These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?
In modern days, users are disturbed by a wide range of advertisements from different companies. I totally believe that it will have negative effects on customers and offer some solutions for these issues.
On the one hand, there is a problem with advertising climbing in today's society. This leads to trouble for consumers. Firstly, it is harmful to the user's mental health, such as being uncomfortable or being distracted by plenty of advertisements. For example, When the consumers are engaging in favorite movie, the advertisements suddenly appear, making them not at ease. Additionally, they also will be cheated when the producers over promote their production. As a result, customers waste an amount of money for useless things. Not only that, It also makes them time-consuming when they spend whole time to try imitating famous people who are seen in advertisements
On the other hand, this is a reason why having to give solutions in order to prevent this issue. First of all, the government plays an important role in controlling advertisements, always appearing anytime anywhere. For instance, if people post unworthy advertisements, they will be punished by fines large money. Besides, the users need to pay a sum of money for not showing advertisements. For example, when they use apps for studying or entertaining, they should expenditure money on that.
In conclusion, I strongly opine that the advertisements are shown by useful advertising to help costumes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us people who are seen in advertisements On the other hand, this is a reason why ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29237288136 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18908506843 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639830508475 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7241468803 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158937565061 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054943460027 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429283647797 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101271857253 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542945334381 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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