Nowadays, Internet technology has vastly improved our lifestyle and it has become a significant trend in many ways that made communication more fast and easier. Some universities have leaded this trend to alternate their university-based coursed to the internet-based courses. While some students prefer that internet-based course is more flexible than going to school, I believe that study at school is necessary.
There are some advantages that Internet-based courses can be provided is students can saved time for traveling to the school. Some students might lived in the rural area where the transportation is not comprehensive in that area, so students who study in a internet-based can easily to practice their study through the internet to the computer at home. Moreover, some internet-based courses that performance to repeat the lesson if students wants to review the course and they can able to replay the video which have saved on their educational website.
On the other hand, university-based course also necessary in many way, such as students have opportunities to study in a group environment, which is beneficial to achieve their social abilities and this technique is important when there are go into society and future career. Also attend the real lectures that student can ask question straight away and get the responded from their tutors directly, in turns of this is hardly happened in a internet-based course.
It is truth that both views have their advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that is necessary for students to attend a real class at university. Technology advancement, nowadays have change in many way of our lifestyle, but in educational filed, there is needed more improvement and plain to replace. Therefore, the traditional course is still a unchangeable method for students.
To sum up, although internet-based course is an advancement trend to those university students, I believe that university-based course is still necessary in educational field and it should not be abandon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in that area, so students who study in a internet-based can easily to practice t...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
...iversity-based course also necessary in many way, such as students have opportunities to...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'attends'.
Suggestion: attends
...go into society and future career. Also attend the real lectures that student can ask ...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in turns of this is hardly happened in a internet-based course. It is truth t...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
...gy advancement, nowadays have change in many way of our lifestyle, but in educational fi...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...refore, the traditional course is still a unchangeable method for students. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39498432602 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27145388936 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3733610174 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431571891452 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169831796608 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100516754149 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245417587003 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726361631963 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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