Nowadays it is very common to move abroad for work and studies because they provide superior education and job opportunities. In addition to that some masses opine that it has both pros and cons on the growth of adolescent. This essay will delve deeper into the matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, indeed it is true that moving into another nation has many positive impact on child's development and it can be seen in many ways such as they get opportunity to learn various skills which are not available in there country as well as they get top class education. For instance there are many countries famous for providing quality education like UK, Canada, USA, Australia and many others. However, many scholars dream to study in these countries because they provide better and variety of job opportunities and assist to build a bright future. Moreover, children will get chance to learn and adapt over different culture and tradition and help in the growth of juvenile.
On the other hand, there are various loopholes of moving into another country such as adolescent were not aware about how to manage their lifestyle in other continents, for example firstly they face many circumstances to adapt the habitat of that country and manage there daily routine. Moreover, it also became indispensable to learn the language of country, otherwise they face many complications in communication with citizens and all these drawbacks creates a extra burden on child which leads a direct impact on the growth of child which is immoral to society.
In conclusion, I reckon the pros overcome the loopholes of shifting abroad in the search of better carrier options and studies because they want desirable outcomes regarding to their future and the only reason behind this is they get varieties in subjects and course.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sist to build a bright future. Moreover, children will get chance to learn and ad...
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...reason behind this is they get varieties in subjects and course.
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Suggestion:
... get varieties in subjects and course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99352750809 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59553785349 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2345192354 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.3 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.6 7.06120827912 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178804315594 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690137320958 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419229977017 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995011960604 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525903827557 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sist to build a bright future. Moreover, children will get chance to learn and ad...
^^
Line 4, column 463, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...itizens and all these drawbacks creates a extra burden on child which leads a dir...
^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reason behind this is they get varieties in subjects and course.
^^
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... get varieties in subjects and course.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99352750809 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59553785349 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2345192354 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.3 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.6 7.06120827912 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178804315594 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690137320958 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419229977017 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995011960604 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525903827557 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.