These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad will also face some difficulties.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign county.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
nowadays a plenty of people tender to go abroad either for studding or working. there are many draw backs and advantages with this trend that will be explained in details.
Due to shortage of job position immigration become very popular among young people. they travel to the first world countries which in industries and factories are booming that cause to provide proper positions for work force according to their degree and skills. owing to high income job and appropriate health insurance infrastructure they have a high standard of living. There are also other positive aspects of living abroad such as high quality culture, security and law enforcement which most of the developed countries have them as hosted countries would not be improved without these attributes. Young generation are able to be up to good with the mentioned points.
To be honest, there also some weakness with in living in foreign countries. Persons living in abroad are too far to be keep in touch with their family which cause homesickness. It is worth noting that speaking with a language which is not your mother language makes you feel isolation as you are not able to stay in touch with native people easily. At last but not least there is a possibility of culture shock because most immigrants are from the third-world countries with a significant difference in customs, traditions and also beliefs. Parents usually cannot stand up with the environment culture which their kids are grown up in. making adoption with culture and law is a very had challenge that they are facing with.
In the way I see, the benefits of living in alien overcome the adversary events of immigration as immigrants are able to achieve so precious experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01384083045 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64607938096 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7551145971 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16160134381 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566959328088 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512227924085 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104520709708 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583331492597 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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