These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, society begins to admit the role of women, so they have opportunities to go out to work and promote, while men may do housework and take care of their children. In my opinion, this development have both positive and negative.
On the one hand, there are some positve things when fathers stay at home and take care of children. First of all, fathers may teach children more hardly than mothers. Fathers will not pamper children very much and children will be punished whenever they do not obey. As a result, children become better and study hard . In addition, fathers will help their children become independent and strong. They know how to care themselves and never reliant on their parents, which help them succeed in the future.
By contrast, this development also has negative things. Firstly, father cannot be as careful as mothers and if fathers make some mistakes for their carelessness in looking after children, which can cause many consequences. For example, children may be illness caused by food or they can feel down when fathers do not pay much attention, which can affect to health and mentation of children. Moreover, they need mother to guide some things about body, sex,… to protect themselves especially girls. Fathers can feel embarrassed whenever they talk to their daughters about sex while mothers will be more suitable.
In conclusion, the changing roles between men and women in a family have positive and negative effects. Every family should have a suitable arrangement to be always happy and cosy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54413855582 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3506627496 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361339111121 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115576628227 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634423852054 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19571851334 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781027516908 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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