These days, people change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages
of this?
Nowadays, in many cases, people especially youth are changing their career path in most often. Some people prefer to work in different working environment and get kinds of experience while many argue that this is not always optimal. But, what are the pros of doing this and, what are the drawbacks? The aim of this essay is to discuss the advantages of changing career several times in life as well as the unwelcome ones.
Those in favour of this opinion have a number of points to support their point of view. If the workers change their work nature in most often, their productivity will be less and less. Because to familiar with the new position and duties, it takes at least six months to fix in new role. If we look to the side of employer, she/he may be worried about to engage in work. They may think, this kind of staffs will not be stay in the new position for very long and unwillingness to hire.
On the other hand, those who oppose the view mentioned above offer their own points as well. The manufactures who have experience in various sectors can bring the different knowledges and ways of working. They can be the managers and can have various sources because they may have a broaden network what can also support to get another jobs when they quite from present ones.
In conclusion, there are clearly both positive and negative side of switching the jobs most often. While, staying in one workplace makes you more profession in job, many unfavourable things can affect your future. In my opinion, changing the occupations can bring the better opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e various sources because they may have a broaden network what can also support to get an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70758122744 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43648881248 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1419083515 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214529614726 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730965212518 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093568791024 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129118740235 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142855490991 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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