Three particular qualities that make someone admirable
it is generally believed that individuals have an admiration of someone such as their parents, a billionaire, or even a famous actor. it is obvious that we admire someone because they possess several particular characteristics which we want for ourselves. From my point of view, it is clearly crucial that patience, listening ability, and honesty are the remarkable qualities that make someone admirable.
it is certainly said that there are three remarkable qualities in order to make someone outstanding. Firstly, patience is one of the most significant qualities that make a person admirable. In fact, people’s lives aren’t bed of roses, so they are always dealing with numerous unimaginable difficulties, obstacles as well as challenges in daily life. people, who are always patient, dare to endure and find a lot of ways to overcome those challenges to be better instead of giving up. Additionally, the ability to listen is incredibly an important factor to make someone admirable. Indeed, when people make mistakes, they are not afraid of receiving any bad feedback from others. In contrast, they are willing to listen and then try to switch to be perfect every single day. Besides, they are willing to listen to others' problems and find some particular ways so as to tackle those issues. Therefore, they completely deserve to make someone admirable. Finally, honesty may be a vital element which leads to an admirable person. No matter how bad the situations are, people always choose to tell the truth as a way to make others trust them. it shows that people always respect others around them as well as believe in themselves. honesty is considered as the best policy that an admirable person should have.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that it is a long-term period to be admired by someone because it requires a great number of specific elements. However, patience, listening ability and honesty are three fundamental characteristics of an admirable person. No matter who people are, it is necessary that they should have these popular qualities listed above to make someone admirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16034985423 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8630598575 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524781341108 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3904204898 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1578947368 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373556863767 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112463897618 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921355928794 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288966400798 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022021693022 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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