Today, crime rates among world are increasing day by day? What are the reasons behind this? How can be solve this?
Due to drastic rise in populations who create criminal activities which lead to lots of complications who are perilous for the whole world. However, there are uncountable obstacles such as poverty, unemployment and uneducated population along with solutions like fix hard punishment, creating more job opportunities, providing free education as well to tackle these hurdles.
The main factor that is why an amount of crime incline dramatically in the globe is that vast majority of humans are enduring from poorness. In addition to this, they are not eligible to purchase meals of three times for their families. Moving further, that is the reason they are involving to perform so many criminal activities like stealing of money and jewellery, robbery in banks, kidnapping and etcetera. The another major concerning area about this perception is that nowadays a huge number of young people are jobless so they have not sufficient wealth to spend their lives comfortably. Furthermore, they have great desire to live in high standards as compared with their peers so that is why they enter in crime rates to earn lots of money easily which spoil their life. For instance, Osama bin laden citizen of Pakistan is a huge example of crime world. Furthermore, he was well-educated but never found any job due to these he became a detrimental terrorist who damaged lots of properties of different nations.
There are multifarious measures to solve this prospective and an initial is that it is mandatory for regimes that they should fix hard penalties for every kinds of crime. Adding to this, so that is why humans feel afraid to do that types of crimes when they think about these punishments. On the other hand, authorities make it crucial that they take various steps to reduce the proportion of unemployment at peak level. Apart from that, this is the reason to decline gradually rates of crime in the worldwide. For instance, in USA, Canada and other regions provide part time jobs of data entry in which person can stay at home and start working online, earn income as well. Beside that, companies who are giving that types of work to adults are assisting government to decrease the percentage of jobless youngsters in nations. Last but not least, regime should provide free education in schools and colleges to poor students who are not able to pay fess. Moreover, education help to decline the proportion of crimes in poverty adults and make them better citizens who pay encourage in the economy of world.
In conclusion, although, growing in populace is responsible to origins of crime. As a result, so many problems are coming with harmful effects which spreads negative impacts on humans and world. Beside that, if government as well as natives will be taking some integer steps than it will control at big levels.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...n USA, Canada and other regions provide part time jobs of data entry in which person can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.016985138 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67479692893 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549893842887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2761022049 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.15 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.55 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14136819161 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454715044046 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490471340309 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758611731205 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460538568547 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.