Today, good health is essential among people. As the need for good health increases, medical service providers make use of their products to gain profit. Do you believe that medical services should not be run by profit making companies? Do you think that the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Today in our society, health is considered as one of the highest priority. As the demand for health continually increases, so as the provision of healthcare policies availed by the private companies. As for me, I concur that there are more negative effects than a positive outcome associated with this trend.
Admittedly, one of the advantages of having a private insurance is like every other insurance where one does not have to entirely pay by cash when an individual is admitted because the insurance company takes care of the billing problems. In fact, when my niece got critically ill, my sister was able to hospitalize her with only thirty pesos of the total bill payable. This makes the whole hospital experience a comfortable one.
However, subscribing to private medical insurance is explicably expensive. To have an exquisite coverage term from time to time, the customers need to pay more. Consumers who are able to pay more can have a wider coverage and a better chance to be prioritized than those who cannot afford to obtain ones. Those who belong to the rich and wealthy are able to accomplish this than those who are less fortunate and low-income workers.
Moreover, having a privately provided medical service creates division and inequality among the members of the society. This is because there are some insurance coverage which are individualized and most are not commonly accepted by some of the hospitals. The hospitalization and the level of care which one may have are going to be different due to them being unaccepted by the institution.
On the whole, it is clear that the drawbacks of having a private insurance far outweighs its benefits. While it is a comfortable experience, obtaining a private health care policy results to a higher payment term and may create inequality within the society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d and most are not commonly accepted by some of the hospitals. The hospitalization and the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as for, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04180064309 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82781295182 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.015759386 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954119971392 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373452627017 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389469101323 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561041768558 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350333285135 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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