today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, advertisement plays a crucial role in illustrating the goods which do not consider as needy, however, they become as the high sales product. This is due to the power of the advertisement as this essay will concentrate on.
First and foremost, advertisement become worldwide spread in all aspects of our life, Such as in hypermarkets, TV shows, and on our billboards. Thus, people are easily exposed to them remarkably. Due to this fact, vulnerable members such as children are significantly under the influence of these publicities. Therefore, they may insist on having these products which are not virtually practicable. So their parents are forced to buy unnecessary tools to stop their children nagging.
Secondly, most of the time advertisement use gimmick in order to illustrate the product unique. Thus, they exaggerate the power of the goods to draw consumer attention. As a result, many consumers purchase more than one mark of the same product because of the false assumption about the power of the shown products. This fact significantly happens in dietary products such as tablets or creams which the failure obese people utilize. Since these products are not as good as the publicity illustrate, they soon leave them and start utilizing the other one.
To sum up, advertisement impact on what people buy markedly. Annually, myriad products are bought without a real necessity due to the power of Publicity. Many customers buy goods immediately after exposing to the powerful publicity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27459016393 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95357339634 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8441242379 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205830441739 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674280355614 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616785937051 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132223017407 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619537110447 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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